A broad statement
“Personalized functional medicine care.”
The unanswered question: “How will your practice understand my situation, and what happens first?”

For Functional Medicine, Integrated Medical & Holistic Dental Practices
They visit. They read. Then they leave.
They may need your care, but your homepage hasn’t helped them understand why to choose you—or what to do next. You’ve paid for their attention. You may never get the chance to answer their questions.
Before you spend more bringing people to your website, find what may be holding them back.
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The page communicates a clear, serviceable offer with strong message-to-market fit, good simplicity, and specific deliverables and price, but conversion is likely limited by weak social proof/case stories, incomplete urgency and scheduling flow, and underused emotional storytelling—address those three areas to materially lift inquiries.
The 19 Points of Marketing Clarity™ are the Marketing Clarity Architect™ evaluation framework, synthesized by Rodney May. These thinkers and their books deepen understanding of individual principles; they are not presented as the source of the framework or as its endorsers.
| Principle | Priority | Score | Finding |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1. Big Idea / Central PromiseAssociated Thinker: David OgilvyChampioned the Big Idea as the focus of an advertising campaign.Recommended Reading: Ogilvy on Advertising — David OgilvyRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | High Priority | 2/3 | The headline ‘Make your value clear’ and the one-off package statement create a central promise but it is generic and not framed as a bold, transformational outcome. |
| 2. Unique Mechanism / DifferentiatorAssociated Thinker: Eugene SchwartzExplained how a product mechanism can distinguish an offer in a sophisticated market.Recommended Reading: Breakthrough Advertising — Eugene SchwartzRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | High Priority | 2/3 | The site cites the ‘19 Points of Clarity in Marketing’ and patient-informed copy as a differentiator, but it does not explain how that method produces better results than other agencies. |
| 3. Proof of ConceptAssociated Thinker: Claude HopkinsChampioned testing and product demonstrations as support for advertising claims.Recommended Reading: Scientific Advertising — Claude HopkinsRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonHarmful Absence | High Priority | 1/3 | There are no case studies, client results, before/after metrics, or testimonial excerpts on the page to demonstrate the package actually generates inquiries or business outcomes. |
| 4. Offer ClarityAssociated Thinker: Alex HormoziPopularized offer design around a clear outcome and perceived value.Recommended Reading: $100M Offers — Alex HormoziRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | High Priority | 3/3 | The package scope, deliverables, included bonuses, price ($2,497), timelines, and revision policy are clearly listed so a buyer can visualize what they receive. |
| 5. Pain ConnectionAssociated Thinker: Donald MillerCenters the customer’s problem in the StoryBrand framework.Recommended Reading: Building a StoryBrand — Donald MillerRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | High Priority | 3/3 | The copy explicitly addresses the buyer pain—sites that list services but leave visitors unsure—and asks the exact questions prospects feel, which aligns with moving buyers from pain toward the solution. |
| 6. Future Self VisionAssociated Thinker: Donald MillerEncourages showing the customer a successful outcome and transformation.Recommended Reading: Building a StoryBrand — Donald MillerRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | Medium Priority | 2/3 | The page hints at the desired future (‘Understand your options. Prepare for your next step.’) but does not paint a vivid future-self story of the practice with more consistent patient inquiries or business results. |
| 7. Emotional ActivationAssociated Thinker: Eugene SchwartzExplained how copy channels and intensifies existing desire.Recommended Reading: Breakthrough Advertising — Eugene SchwartzRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | Medium Priority | 2/3 | The copy leans toward relief and clarity, which is appropriate, but it rarely triggers stronger purchase emotions like urgency, pride, or fear of lost opportunity that accelerate decisions. |
| 8. Simplicity of MessageAssociated Thinker: Donald MillerChampions simple, clear messaging that customers can quickly understand.Recommended Reading: Building a StoryBrand — Donald MillerRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | High Priority | 3/3 | The site compresses the offer into ‘One offer. One clear website. A connected path’ and the page structure keeps messaging focused and easy to understand. |
| 9. Lead with ContrastAssociated Thinker: Eugene SchwartzRelated thinking: position a fresh claim or mechanism against familiar market promises.Recommended Reading: Breakthrough Advertising — Eugene SchwartzRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | Medium Priority | 2/3 | There is a basic old-way vs new-way contrast (pages that list services vs pages that explain value), but the ‘old way’ pain is not dramatized enough to make the alternative feel urgent and obvious. |
| 10. Credibility AnchorsAssociated Thinker: Robert CialdiniResearches authority as a basis for credible persuasion.Recommended Reading: Influence — Robert CialdiniRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | High Priority | 2/3 | The consultant’s name and book are shown and package specifics lend credibility, but the page lacks client logos, testimonial quotes, quantified results, or third-party validation at key risk points. |
| 11. SpecificityAssociated Thinker: Claude HopkinsChampioned concrete facts over general claims in “Being Specific.”Recommended Reading: Scientific Advertising — Claude HopkinsRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | High Priority | 3/3 | The page provides sharp specifics including deliverables, bonus values, price, timelines (‘15 business days’), and revision terms which reduce ambiguity for buyers. |
| 12. Logical PathwayAssociated Thinker: Joseph SugarmanHis “slippery slide” approach connects one sentence to the next.Recommended Reading: The Adweek Copywriting Handbook — Joseph SugarmanRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | High Priority | 3/3 | The site walks visitors through ‘See what you receive’, the funnel stages, and a 3-step plan and launch process, creating a clear decision pathway without mental jumps. |
| 13. Risk ReversalAssociated Thinker: Jay AbrahamChampions risk reversal to reduce the buyer’s fear of a poor decision.Recommended Reading: Getting Everything You Can Out of All You've Got — Jay AbrahamRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | Medium Priority | 2/3 | There are useful protective elements (two revision rounds, completion of missing deliverables at no extra charge) but no money-back or performance guarantee to fully remove buyer fear of loss. |
| 14. Urgency DriversAssociated Thinker: Robert CialdiniResearches scarcity; genuine limits can give people a reason to act.Recommended Reading: Influence — Robert CialdiniRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonHarmful Absence | Medium Priority | 1/3 | The page contains no deadlines, limited-availability language, or other specific drivers to create a real reason to book the review now, and scheduling is explicitly ‘not connected yet’. |
| 15. Call to Action FocusAssociated Thinker: Donald MillerCalls for a clear, direct invitation to take the next step.Recommended Reading: Building a StoryBrand — Donald MillerRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | High Priority | 2/3 | There is a clear CTA (‘Book Your Marketing Clarity Offer Review’) but the scheduling flow is not integrated and CTAs are somewhat diffuse across sections, reducing conversion friction masking the next step. |
| 16. Message-to-Market MatchAssociated Thinker: Eugene SchwartzExplained how to match a message to the prospect’s awareness and market sophistication.Recommended Reading: Breakthrough Advertising — Eugene SchwartzRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | High Priority | 3/3 | The copy specifically targets functional medicine practices, uses relevant language (patient guide, first visit), and frames problems those practices recognize, so the match is strong. |
| 17. Story-Based ProofAssociated Thinker: Donald MillerRelated thinking: organize customer stories around a problem, action, and successful outcome.Recommended Reading: Building a StoryBrand — Donald MillerRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonHarmful Absence | High Priority | 1/3 | There are no client or patient stories or narrative case examples to make results emotionally believable, which is critical for services selling through trust and experience. |
| 18. Repetition of Key PointsAssociated Thinker: Donald MillerTeaches repeating a clear call to action in consistent language.Recommended Reading: Building a StoryBrand — Donald MillerRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | Medium Priority | 3/3 | Key truths—one offer, website + lead magnet + emails, and the package price/timeline—are repeated across sections to reinforce the main message. |
| 19. Structural Persuasion LayeringAssociated Thinker: Joseph SugarmanRelated thinking: sequence copy so each part carries the reader toward the buying decision.Recommended Reading: The Adweek Copywriting Handbook — Joseph SugarmanRead this book to understand this principle more deeply.View the book on AmazonNot Missing | High Priority | 2/3 | The page orders pain, solution, deliverables, process, and CTA coherently, but persuasion elements (proof, urgency, guarantees) are unevenly layered and leave conversion gaps. |
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From finding the gaps to fixing them
If you’ve received your evaluation, you now have a clearer view of what your homepage may be missing. If you’re still exploring, the sample shows you the kinds of gaps I look for.
Would you like me to turn those findings into a homepage that gives the right patient more confidence to contact your practice?

With the Patient Acquisition Bridge™, I find which of the 19 Points of Marketing Clarity™ are missing or weak, then build them into your homepage.
So your homepage helps patients understand who you help, why your approach is different, and how to take the first step toward a consultation.
See How I’ll Rebuild Your HomepageThe method behind the work
A clear way to check whether your homepage gives the right patient enough reason to contact you.
Your patient wants to know: “Is this practice right for me? Do they understand my concerns? Why should I trust them? What happens if I reach out?”
The 19 Points of Marketing Clarity™ check the parts of your homepage that help answer those questions—from your central promise and proof to the order of your information and your call to action.
My approach is informed by studying established marketing thinkers, including Claude Hopkins, Donald Miller, Dan Kennedy, and Gary Halbert.
The 19 Points of Marketing Clarity™ are the Marketing Clarity Architect™ evaluation framework. The books listed under each point explain individual principles; they are separate from the framework itself.
Open the list below to see each point, its associated thinker, and a book you can explore.
The 19 points show what is missing or weak. The Marketing Clarity Bridge™ is the process I use to put those points into your homepage, using your practice’s facts and patient feedback.
The 19 Points of Marketing Clarity™ are the Marketing Clarity Architect™ evaluation framework, synthesized by Rodney May. These thinkers and their books deepen understanding of individual principles; they are not presented as the source of the framework or as its endorsers.
“Rodney turned patient insights into a clear message that reflects who we are and how we help.”Dr. Richard Sowerby · Clear Choice Natural Health
Rodney May’s marketing credentials
10X Marketing
DigitalMarketerWhat your website needs to do
Patients need to know who you help, why they can trust you, and what to do next.
A potential patient may arrive with questions about your approach, the commitment involved, and whether your practice fits their needs.
Words such as “personalized care” can sound reassuring. They still need an explanation.
What do you actually do? What can they expect when they contact you? Why should they trust what you say?
If those answers are missing, an interested visitor can leave with their questions unanswered.
Start by checking what your homepage explains—and what it leaves patients to figure out.
Your patient is trying to answer:
Give patients answers before they call
You put care into every patient conversation. Your homepage should carry that same care when you’re not there to explain.
Picture a visitor reading your page and understanding who you help, how your approach works, and what happens at the first visit. They can see the next step and decide whether to contact you.
When they call, your staff has a starting point: “What would you like to know about the first visit?” The page has already explained the basics, so the conversation can focus on their questions.
That is the experience the rebuild is designed to support. Your free evaluation shows which parts of your current message need attention first.
Test first. Then choose the fix.
Think of changing your website without testing it as marketing malpractice. You could pay to fix the wrong problem.
You use evidence to guide patient care. Bring that same discipline to your website. Start with the free 19-Point Marketing Clarity Evaluation to find gaps in your message, proof, offer, and next step. Then use patient surveys and your inquiry and booking numbers to guide what changes—and measure what happens afterward.
Clear messages create confident decisions
I’m still building documented case studies for this service. The client feedback and examples here show my research and message work. I don’t yet have verified results showing how many additional patient inquiries the complete package produces.
As projects are completed, I’ll share what changed and what happened afterward, with each client’s permission.
“Rodney turned patient insights into a clear message that reflects who we are and how we help.”

These numbers describe the research. Booking and revenue gains have not been measured here.
See the finding, the message, and what it supportsThe principles at work — right here
Five documented homepage changes you can inspect.
See the earlier wording, the revised wording, and the reason for each change.
The next improvement is stronger proof through client recommendations and documented results.
View the full evaluationOctober 12, 2026 · Message evaluation using my 19-point framework; not a measure of inquiries or revenue.I use the evaluation to find gaps, make changes, and check the page again. The linked comparison shows earlier C-to-A message changes, alongside my October 12 evaluation of 53/57. Future evaluations may differ as the page changes. The five examples show the actual message work; they do not establish gains in inquiries or revenue.
Your evaluation gives you the same starting point: a clear view of what needs attention.
Patient Acquisition Bridge™
A homepage evaluation and rebuild, plus the tools to turn patient interest into the next step.
Four bonuses. All included.$1,600Combined estimated value · No added charge
Homepage evaluation + rebuild$2,500
Four included bonuses$1,600
Total estimated value$4,100
Your introductory rate, with all four bonuses$2,497
I’m offering Patient Acquisition Bridge™ at an introductory rate as I build this service and its documented case studies. You can review the free evaluation and the complete scope before deciding.
This introductory rate will increase. With your permission, I may also document your project as a case study.
Two payments of $1,248.50.
Send your details. I’ll confirm the scope and arrange your first payment. The request form collects no payment.
First complete draft targeted within 15 business days after kickoff and receipt of required materials.
Timing depends on feedback, approvals, and access. We agree on the launch date at kickoff. These are delivery protections, not a refund or results guarantee.I handle each project personally, so I can take on three practices right now.
See the Complete PackageRodney May
Marketing Clarity Architect™
Author of Clear Enough to Lead
How the Marketing Clarity Bridge™ works
I check your homepage against the 19 Points of Marketing Clarity™, find what is missing or weak, and rebuild the page to address those gaps. That process is the Marketing Clarity Bridge™.
For example: If your page says “personalized care” without explaining it, I add what your practice actually does and what a patient can expect at the first visit.
The 19 points tell us what to check. The Marketing Clarity Bridge™ puts the needed points into the page. The Patient Acquisition Bridge™ is the paid service that delivers the rebuild and follow-up tools.
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